Here's a little ditty I wrote a couple of years ago commemorating a rare snow for us Birminghamites. We had one of our"winter storms" over the weekend and I thought I'd exhume the poem and post it here for your amusement. Fellow southerners--nod; distant northerners--roll your eyes; elsewhere crows--laugh.
Middle Alabama Snow
We wake to snow
But still incredulous,
Our disbelief like sleep
In dream-deep eyes.
In outsized flakes
Like kindergartners cut
From origami folds,
The snow descends
And reunites
On roofs and shrubbery.
The window watches on
As we look through.
Our wonderment
Is tempered by distrust.
We know the heavy sigh
And shoulder-slump
That come as sure
As morning’s sun, as sure
As he will stand and stretch
His sleep-fresh rays.
Our mittens are
Mismatched and our long-johns
Don’t fit and itch, but time
Won’t stop for us.
It never does.
By afternoon, the thaw
Will break a febrile sweat
Across the knolls
Of matted grass.
With snow in blotches
Like hives-mottled flesh
On hoods of cars
And yellow lawns,
The purple pansy will
Erect its humble head,
Revivified.
So quickly we tie
Our tennis shoes and zip
Our raincoats up. We grab
The boogie-boards
And laundry bins
To sled the nearest slope
And crash and climb and crash
Again. Again.
Then not so smoothly,
Now in mostly
Mud,
But again.
Ah. I love this poem.
ReplyDeleteOur wonderment
Is tempered by distrust.
We know the heavy sigh
And shoulder-slump
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fantastic stanza, that. Ah, but all of it!
You made me see it. But again.
ReplyDeleteWhere but in the South can one recall decades passed by titles like "The Snow of '93" or "The Snow of '82 are was it "83", or "Winter Storm of '11"? Only we Southerners treat snow with the awe due it. Having stopped everything else we can set around warm fire places or stand at those picture windows so close to the fire and the snow and see it with memory eyes while looking with real time eyes the wonder of snow that this station below the Mason Dixon passes far too quickly ... oh well ... for the moment back to the mud ... (I meant snow). Thanks for your poem it says it all and says it well!
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